Wednesday, March 28, 2012

My visit to the Wagner Archives

Open on weekdays from 9:30 to 4,  My ENG101 class went on an interesting trip to the Wagner Archives in La Guardia Community College. Upon entry, the class was split between to small rooms. One room was rather decorated with organized shelves, red carpet, lamp lighting, and somewhat sophisticated atmosphere. The other, a small conference room with a round table and a rather large television. I was sat in the small conference room with a few of my classmates. Our tour guy, for lack of a better term,was a man named Steve. In the conference room, we held a nice discussion about the 1960's and explaining primary sources in the use of researching history. From newspaper cut-outs to television recordings, the Wagner Archives really had it all. Mr. Steve gave us copies of Mayor Robert F. Wagner's speech given July 22, 1964; when the Harlem Riots were at it's peak. After analyzing the speech line by line, we were able to grasp the violent and misunderstood atmosphere of Harlem at the time. In his remarks, the mayor described specifically how there were broken houses, angry gangs and residents sprawling the streets. Later on we went into the cold room where we saw journal writings and paraphernalia from the 1960's. One object that was very entertaining was the giant, gold glove Mohammed Ali signed for Mayor Beame. In one journal entry, which was written in German, Steve went into detail about how the lower east side of Manhattan was an area filled with fresh-off-the-boaters from Germany, Italy and so on. In the end, what I collected from all this was how much global activity started rising in the 60's, despite the Harlem Riots.

1 comment:

  1. Hello Danny,

    I enjoyed your description and use of many colorful words that give the reader a sense of the decor of the Wagner archives. You have many good ideas and have adequate writing skills.

    To make your work more concise, it is important to separate your main ideas into separate paragraphs. For example, you speak about two different archived articles with very different topics in the same paragraph. It was somewhat difficult to follow a complete thought. Perhaps you would benefit from speaking about the Harlem Riots in one paragraph and speak about the German article in another.
    In addition, after reading the assignment, it seems the professor wanted you to spend more time writing about the actual archives and less time on the decor of the location. Please expand on your good ideas and observations to make your work the best it can be.

    -Good luck
    Shereen

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